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Beckey
is 83% done
Noticed another typo (this is how the sentence reads): Rickard's roar, when he noticed she was no longer in sight, gave Niall the moment he needed, and he struck hard and fast, hitting the other wolf with the flat of his head in the side of the ribs.
— May 16, 2015 11:48PM
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Beckey
is 95% done
To be used for the review In some sections there was a good balance of details and the speed of the story that is being told but in other sections there's lack of details and it's seemed rushed....
— May 17, 2015 12:32AM
Beckey
is 83% done
Please someone tell me if I am correct in saying that the sentence in my prior update is a run on or not... And is it my muddled 3am mind (that is dealing with some pain...) correct with thinking that sentence is convoluted and confusing? Ok back to reading in few...
— May 16, 2015 11:49PM
Beckey
is 61% done
Noticed an error Theory of a Deadman song: http://youtu.be/9YrWsmlJSiw "Bad Girl Friend" is how it is written in the book Also this one has more preverbal meat to it with details which is good but the first book was lacking ... All good...
— May 16, 2015 10:52PM
