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...meets Good Omens meets idk maybe Encanto.... I could go on. The point is that I never got into the story so it was incredibly easy to think of all the other stories that did this plot in a way that engaged me more
— Jul 03, 2023 06:41PM
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Morgan Joyner
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probably a good read for the kids who liked snapdragon
— Jul 03, 2023 06:48PM
Morgan Joyner
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The history of the witches is kind of clunky, the transition from first-person to third is not obvious and therefore confusing
— Jul 03, 2023 05:35PM
Morgan Joyner
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First thought is I'm not quite buying the setting nor the protagonist's motivations. It almost feels like she's a Mary-Sue, written just for you to map yourself onto her.
— Jul 03, 2023 05:28PM

