MsRomanticReads’s Reviews > An Opportunity Seized > Status Update

I'm easily distracted to go do other things like eat or check emails, hence why I'm only on 21%. In the 2 minutes it takes her to go to Jason's room right next to hers, she has one eye roll inducing thought after another.

Too many em dashes present when a simple comma would suffice. They're disruptive to the flow.

I guess the heroine has never watched Hostel. When a sexy stranger shows interest, it's enough for her that they're compatriots abroad for her to go along with him. And they barely knew each other five minutes and he'd already seen her in her bra.