Tacitus Lector’s Reviews > A Matter of Time, Vol. 1 > Status Update
Tacitus Lector
is on page 102 of 280
I get that Jory is attractive, but the sheer amount of adoration and lust he gets from multiple directions feels incredibly over the top. I mean, how many faceless sub-characters is Calmes going to have lusting after this guy? It's getting boring.
In fact, a lot of the scenes are just redundant and boring, as if desperately trying to make sure the readers knows Jory is uber amazing in every way possible. We get it
— May 20, 2015 06:35PM
In fact, a lot of the scenes are just redundant and boring, as if desperately trying to make sure the readers knows Jory is uber amazing in every way possible. We get it
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Tacitus Lector
is on page 110 of 280
Okay, Jory is basically every domineering, nagging, "woman knows best" chick I've sever seen in a sitcom, except he has boy parts. He treats Sam like a moron jock who can barely tie his shoes, all while HE makes every wrong decision imaginable. I'm starting to think Mary Clames is doing some kind of Mary-Sue thing in her novels, because these MCs are ALL THE SAME.
— May 20, 2015 06:42PM
Tacitus Lector
is on page 39 of 280
I'm already starting to think that this story would have been better in the POV of the cop rather than Jory.
— May 19, 2015 08:16PM
Tacitus Lector
is on page 24 of 280
So far (unless these people end up having roles in the main plot later) chapter two is a completely unnecessary waste of time. Wow. And also, I feel like Calmes has botched the "first impressions" test yet again. I don't like Jory. He feels like a arrogant, insensitive little shit who, quite frankly, seems to have a low opinion of every woman around him. Here's to hoping he gets better =P
— May 19, 2015 08:08PM
