Jeanny’s Reviews > September Moon > Status Update

I can't believe that just happened. Christy move Arys sharing personal details with Jenner to fuck up kale & Alexa

But with Alexa the author never clearly defines anything character trait related other than hypocrite idk what actions Alexa will take. I feel like the author slaps all things out of the norm (character wise) with the easy label of "reckless" & expects the reader to just ignore how it doesn't vibe with previous actions

But with Alexa the author never clearly defines anything character trait related other than hypocrite idk what actions Alexa will take. I feel like the author slaps all things out of the norm (character wise) with the easy label of "reckless" & expects the reader to just ignore how it doesn't vibe with previous actions

Arys has an easily defined character he's an absolute sneak, is & has always been secretive, 99% of the time selfish that 1% he's not selfish is bc it's important to Alexa he's not ie Kale. He's a murderer with a limited amount of "give a shit" left. Ie he doesn't kill children. He's underhanded, a true predator, manipulative, & an asshole. Most of what he does is within character & it's easy as a reader to identify

The bitch is not only a hypocrite but also bipolar. It's impossible to determine if what Alexa does is within her character bc Alexa doesn't have a steady character. This is a huge flaw in the writing. IMO Shaz's changes are due to character growth he went out into the woods for 5 weeks as a slightly dependent absolute ninny & came back as an overly aggressive asshole.