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Lyx Robinson
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Kissen is so fucking cool. Cropped ginger hair, "dead curse" scar on her jaw, godkilling sword? She's like Geralt of Rivia's cooler sister. I want to draw her so bad. Not sure exactly how the prosthetic leg works, but fantasy prosthetics gives lots of liberties. I also love the contrast between her absolutely obliterating that river god & then plucking off her leg and slumping in her wheelchair to rest. Brilliant
— Jul 12, 2023 08:12AM
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Lyx Robinson
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First chapters are solid, editor did a poor job with that prologue tho, it makes for a very stumbling start:
- The opening paragraph is an unreadable list of names, reads like the Voluspa with zero context clues
- Spelling mistake of Talicia vs "Talica" on the map
- "Thatched roof with a hole to let smoke through"? Thatch lets smoke through, it's the point. No need for a hole, especially in a rainy seaside town
— Jun 28, 2023 11:03PM
- The opening paragraph is an unreadable list of names, reads like the Voluspa with zero context clues
- Spelling mistake of Talicia vs "Talica" on the map
- "Thatched roof with a hole to let smoke through"? Thatch lets smoke through, it's the point. No need for a hole, especially in a rainy seaside town
