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kimberly_rose
is on page 170 of 380
I'm frustrated. This had a lot of potential and the writing voice is smooth, readable. And the two mcs and the original set of secondary characters, I so easily fell into their world. But now, now I'm so disconnected, so removed from the story, I don't care anymore. Goodbye and good luck, boys. I have a feeling it will work out beautifully, the scenes will be lush, but I'm not in your heads anymore.
— May 26, 2015 06:20AM
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kimberly_rose
is on page 165 of 380
Oh LORD, now I'm rammed into *another* room full of new people I don't care about--this time, instead of G's set of peps, it's Jorgen's. Seriously, the plotting/pacing? Off. I know characters are weaker when they exist in a bubble, and yeah, these boys need outside connections, but don't give me a shitton of new people so deep into the story AND separate the two mcs I spent all this time committing to as a couple.
— May 26, 2015 06:15AM
kimberly_rose
is on page 142 of 380
And I have a really bad feeling about this sex talk... I sure as hell don't wanna read about G getting close with anyone else.... I'm kinda feeling betrayed by this story at this point.... I'll give it a few more chapters.
— May 26, 2015 06:04AM
kimberly_rose
is on page 138 of 380
I *was* right into this book, but now I'm all meeeeh, what with the introduction of a whole new set of characters to attempt FEELZ for and the physical separation of the two mcs.
— May 26, 2015 06:02AM
