EroticaAfterDark (Lilith)’s Reviews > Bartered > Status Update
EroticaAfterDark (Lilith)
is 57% done
Are you effing kidding me? It finally gets intressting and the chapter is over? Bad storytelling, sister, you should reward torment after 50% of blabla and bad, unnecessary French.
— May 28, 2015 01:02AM
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EroticaAfterDark (Lilith)’s Previous Updates
EroticaAfterDark (Lilith)
is 26% done
.... here rosebuds puckered... how erotic...
— May 27, 2015 05:44AM
EroticaAfterDark (Lilith)
is 13% done
I couldn't care less about the male MC POV and what with the French, seriously? Cockslap right into the face again. And the sexual encounter left me absolutely cold. Why am I continuing?
— May 26, 2015 12:29AM
