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John
John is 2% done
The metaphors and other literary devices are already annoying. "With arms and legs flailing, he fell like Alice in Wonderland plummeting into the rabbit hole." Ugh. "The guilt was haunting, and like a bloodthirsty vampire in pursuit of a juicy neck; he was hell bent on getting something to mask his pain." Oh , Dear Lord.
May 31, 2015 08:57AM
ARIVACA: Guardians of the Light

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John is 2% done
I didn't like the characters, content, or style at all.
Nov 11, 2015 07:31PM
ARIVACA: Guardians of the Light


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