Erin’s Reviews > The Tethered Mage > Status Update
Erin
is 74% done
There are some definite pacing and editing issues here. Or Amalia just isn't good at politicking.
— Jul 31, 2023 08:07AM
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Erin
is 23% done
I probably just need to work harder at getting to the main plot, I suspect it will get better.
Quick rant: I hate the plot point of "can't tell the leader that something isn't ready" even when it's clear to anybody with a brain that the thing couldn't be ready in time. Just tell the fucking doge, of course Zaira isn't ready after a week.
— Jul 20, 2023 08:29AM
Quick rant: I hate the plot point of "can't tell the leader that something isn't ready" even when it's clear to anybody with a brain that the thing couldn't be ready in time. Just tell the fucking doge, of course Zaira isn't ready after a week.
