Cynthia’s Reviews > Because You Said > Status Update

It was going so well until the heroine just had to do something that made no damn sense..so i'm hitting pause until i decide if i wanna give her another chance. It's also moving a bit too fast for my liking and would have benefited by fleshing things out more to give the reader a chance to not roll their eyes at the heroine's melodramatics before even hitting the 50% mark.