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Cont. There is no military precision or details to his characters that says he followed orders. In fact if the characters never said anything I would never have pegged him as ex military
Or she... she apparently "grew up in an Inn" or worked in an inn, and yet doesnt know how you handle men or seeing people be sexual isn't something she is used to. Blushing virgin unused to people being animals.
— Aug 06, 2023 10:43AM
Or she... she apparently "grew up in an Inn" or worked in an inn, and yet doesnt know how you handle men or seeing people be sexual isn't something she is used to. Blushing virgin unused to people being animals.
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Or women being in high ranking positions means that somehow sexual abuse on their ships still happen? It's not one tiny role but multiple women in charge and yet this still happens on their watch?
Or that the ghost spirits the girl grew up with and KNOWS they are made into ship icons and KNOWS that these spirits take forms and yet when seeing one makes her freak out and choose possible rape over being near one?
— Aug 06, 2023 10:48AM
Or that the ghost spirits the girl grew up with and KNOWS they are made into ship icons and KNOWS that these spirits take forms and yet when seeing one makes her freak out and choose possible rape over being near one?
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HM Long does a great job at creating a unique world, but doesn't quite get the world building achievement IMHO.
Her scenes are too condictory or the text doesn't support it at all.
He is a disgraced navy man. And yet I have not seen him do anything that remotely connects him to the navy outside of other characters saying "hey weren't you in the military" there is no getting up at the morning no matter the day...
— Aug 06, 2023 10:40AM
Her scenes are too condictory or the text doesn't support it at all.
He is a disgraced navy man. And yet I have not seen him do anything that remotely connects him to the navy outside of other characters saying "hey weren't you in the military" there is no getting up at the morning no matter the day...