Crystal’s Reviews > Defying Fate > Status Update

Was this published on purpose? A draft uploaded on accident perhaps? I'm no grammar/punctuation nazi but this book is killing me. The lack of commas then the crazy amount of commas in the wrong place simply kills the story. I've had to reread sentences because it was confusing. The story is not worth it. And I'm reading it for free! Sounds rough and I'm sorry but lack of flow is really that bad.