Jamie (Books and Ladders)’s Reviews > Fractured Dream > Status Update

I might have to put this one on hold.

what I don't understand is why even GIVE them the group disguises if you are going to separate the group two seconds later.

eye rolls again

why is nothing really happening still. I usually love prophecies but there are too many and they are all leading to the same thing so let's just get that thing started.

eye roll

starting this one up again

why is nothing really happening. so much traveling to "world build" but more like info-dumps all over the place while the characters go from one area to the next.

I just. I don't understand. Story has like half her memories and yet she "knows" certain things and then they take time to explain things to Adam and Elliot but it also feels like Story is learning too. Which is confusing. Either she knows or she doesn't. And it is so so obvious that she is torn in two which is why they keep bringing it up.

I'm so bored with this. there is no real excitement and the characters are so dull. Story "knows" everything and yet she still has to ask questions? It doesn't make sense to me.

ugh more info dumping.