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Three big problems:
1. I don't like any of these allegedly lovely people or their allegedly enchanting upper-middle-class enclave.
2. The viewpoint character should really be one of the inhabitants of this evil property and not the neighbour-lady, surely?
3. Even after a whole novel of this nonsense, I don't think I'd actually believe this property was evil even if I were the neighbour-lady.
— Aug 15, 2023 09:23AM
1. I don't like any of these allegedly lovely people or their allegedly enchanting upper-middle-class enclave.
2. The viewpoint character should really be one of the inhabitants of this evil property and not the neighbour-lady, surely?
3. Even after a whole novel of this nonsense, I don't think I'd actually believe this property was evil even if I were the neighbour-lady.
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