Starlight’s Reviews > Sanctuary With Kings > Status Update
Starlight
is 65% done
Unsurprisingly, more than a few editing problems already popped up
I’m kind of disgusted with the seemingly lack of editing actually. I can’t imagine producing and putting all the effort into my own book and publishing it with all this shit.
Literally, minor things like the misspelled character names, ticks me off. Annoying details that come off as a bad smell.
Ugh More than a hundred pages lefr
— Aug 19, 2023 09:56AM
I’m kind of disgusted with the seemingly lack of editing actually. I can’t imagine producing and putting all the effort into my own book and publishing it with all this shit.
Literally, minor things like the misspelled character names, ticks me off. Annoying details that come off as a bad smell.
Ugh More than a hundred pages lefr
Like flag
Starlight’s Previous Updates
Starlight
is 90% done
its midnight
finally fucking done
changing the rating from two stars
to one
im not feeling generous at all
ive certainly read worse books
but rn
this feels like its barely one star worth of rating
.
i still care nothing for the characters or the plot
if nothing else
rn im eager to search for a new story to dive into
hopefully its good
— Aug 21, 2026 10:18PM
finally fucking done
changing the rating from two stars
to one
im not feeling generous at all
ive certainly read worse books
but rn
this feels like its barely one star worth of rating
.
i still care nothing for the characters or the plot
if nothing else
rn im eager to search for a new story to dive into
hopefully its good
Starlight
is 69% done
a little over five hundred pages
taking me so long to get through bc i keep stopping and getting distracted
mainly bc of boredom
ive been over it
and these characters and their stupid little eationship dramas
the sword quest scene was 🥱
the training stuff with the fmc is even more so boring and tedious
then there’s the drama with the reluctant minotaur
and forget the shit with birsha
— Aug 21, 2026 05:47PM
taking me so long to get through bc i keep stopping and getting distracted
mainly bc of boredom
ive been over it
and these characters and their stupid little eationship dramas
the sword quest scene was 🥱
the training stuff with the fmc is even more so boring and tedious
then there’s the drama with the reluctant minotaur
and forget the shit with birsha
Starlight
is 69% done
mainly how she got there
all that shit and trauma
and the mmcs animals or whatever
the guy wasnt an elf
he’s a gryphon
there’s the dragon ofc
the minotaur and the wolf
idr if there’s more mmcs
idk about this rolant guy
honestly
the plot is fucking boring as hell
i really couldnt care less about any of these ppl
— Aug 21, 2026 05:45PM
all that shit and trauma
and the mmcs animals or whatever
the guy wasnt an elf
he’s a gryphon
there’s the dragon ofc
the minotaur and the wolf
idr if there’s more mmcs
idk about this rolant guy
honestly
the plot is fucking boring as hell
i really couldnt care less about any of these ppl
Starlight
is 69% done
so i was right and wrong
this is the book i was looking for
it just took awhile to get to the scene i remembered
which was all the stuff when she got to the castle, something about chess, and cleaning the sleeping dragons scales
i love the dreaming stuff and all the castle magic stuff
which i didnt recall until rereading
i completely forgot about all other details though
— Aug 21, 2026 05:43PM
this is the book i was looking for
it just took awhile to get to the scene i remembered
which was all the stuff when she got to the castle, something about chess, and cleaning the sleeping dragons scales
i love the dreaming stuff and all the castle magic stuff
which i didnt recall until rereading
i completely forgot about all other details though
Starlight
is 11% done
apparently this is a reread
i recalled nothing
and still dont
more than that is i dont care to so far from what ive reread
im only familiar with the first fmc and mmcs of this series i think
i was searching for a book id read already with a certain blurb/plot
thought it was this one
but its clearly not
ugh.
— Aug 20, 2026 05:57PM
i recalled nothing
and still dont
more than that is i dont care to so far from what ive reread
im only familiar with the first fmc and mmcs of this series i think
i was searching for a book id read already with a certain blurb/plot
thought it was this one
but its clearly not
ugh.
Starlight
is 90% done
Kind of forgettable now that I’m done reading
I’d almost rather read more about what happens to all of them after the bad guy is defeated and they’re free to live their long lives in peace.
Now I’m just eager to find a good series to dive into, 🤞
— Aug 19, 2023 02:23PM
I’d almost rather read more about what happens to all of them after the bad guy is defeated and they’re free to live their long lives in peace.
Now I’m just eager to find a good series to dive into, 🤞
Starlight
is 81% done
Of course not everything is terrible with this series
Thank goodness. Since the sweetverse series is a repeated fave of mine for a reason.
I just wish there were more good moments. The writing/writing style I mean. Like the idea of each sequel in this series so far, has had stronger fmcs and mmcs than the last. I liked that the stronger creatures weren’t immediately introduced, like the best saved for last
— Aug 19, 2023 11:42AM
Thank goodness. Since the sweetverse series is a repeated fave of mine for a reason.
I just wish there were more good moments. The writing/writing style I mean. Like the idea of each sequel in this series so far, has had stronger fmcs and mmcs than the last. I liked that the stronger creatures weren’t immediately introduced, like the best saved for last
Starlight
is 27% done
I’m predicting
Her nightmares and her feeling drained/or however she put it, is bc of birsha having some kind of another stolen monster ability that allows him access to her dreams, her nightmares and memories, and draining her at the same time.
I’ll be so annoyed if I’m right.
This series has been annoyingly predictable.
— Aug 18, 2023 09:42PM
Her nightmares and her feeling drained/or however she put it, is bc of birsha having some kind of another stolen monster ability that allows him access to her dreams, her nightmares and memories, and draining her at the same time.
I’ll be so annoyed if I’m right.
This series has been annoyingly predictable.
Starlight
is 14% done
My favorite bit so far is the “introduction” to Hywel the sleeping dragon. If it had taken up a whole chapter or two, I wouldn’t have been mad. I’m already dreading the sex scenes this book will likely have like the previous ones in this series.
— Aug 18, 2023 08:07PM

