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Our heroine is also very confident that every possible love interest wants to get in her pants. One has already tried and either she is imagining things or the other is already "jealous". If this book is supposed to have any decent romance in it, it's off to a bad start already. I also don't particularly like the heroine.

Okay, kind of getting into the narrative a little now. But often taken aback by the subpar writing in some scenes, or rather the heroine herself. First of all, why the heck would she get hired for such a high position, it's never clarified, and she just acts like it's normal.

Too many potential love interests ahhhhhh

"Man, I was such a slut. Not really. Last time I was with anyone was... Well, we won't think about that, because it was an awful long time. I could probably put virgins to shame." Maybe that is why you're slobbering all over every male piece of ass you see haha.

Still waiting to get into her style of writing.. It seems very basic at times, some grammar mistakes. And all the guys have "dark brown eyes" and "dark brown hair" haha, some creativity with the wording would be nice. Also MC is behaving like a little horny teenager, she even calls herself immature quite frequently :D

Yes... Now MC tells us that she despises another character solely because of her "over the top use of the color pink." Peachy.

She uses a lot of ", and that was..". Noticing something like that while reading doesn't bode well..

Not sure where this is going and if I'm gonna like the heroine.. What's with the overly detailed description of the outward appearance of the building where she works?