Michelle ♥♥♥♥’s Reviews > Grey > Status Update

So clearly, James didn't proof read this because one page he's doing one thing then the next page he's doing something he'd already stopped doing. She also makes Christian seem dumb because he's doing things now that he didn't do before; in Ana's story! I'll keep going though. If I had to rate it just on editing and not syncing properly this book would have a 1.