Paul (Life In The Slow Lane)’s Reviews > Arctic Snare > Status Update
Paul (Life In The Slow Lane)
is 55% done
The snow tanks only hold two people. Now, all of a sudden, they hold four! What??? The grammar errors are distracting as is the corny dialogue. 🙄
— Aug 22, 2023 12:35PM
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Paul (Life In The Slow Lane)
is 29% done
Absolutely the worst spelling and grammar errors. Total lack of editing. "Benny and Luna, take the left (corridor)." Next line, "Benny and Luna hurried to the right tunnel." 🤣 Did the author even go to school?
— Aug 20, 2023 12:47PM
Paul (Life In The Slow Lane)
is 18% done
How would you mount a .50 calibre machine gun on a one-person snowmobile? Impossible, right?
— Aug 19, 2023 04:17PM
