Claire B **paused for now**’s Reviews > Phoenix Rise > Status Update

Probably the most ineffectual characters I’ve ever read. The only thing they do well and consistently is behave inconsistently. I’m left confused and dazed and not in a good way. I finished it but I’m not sure why I bothered.

*1.5 Stars* rounded up

Chaotic and disjointed writing. No build up to the relationship, no chemistry, no joined up plot, no research into the military setup, bullying behaviour by the “love” interests, no character development… no more ranting from me.

If you are going to use a military setting at least do some research. This is awful.