Stephen’s Reviews > Orientation > Status Update

At 62 pages one doesn't expect much but if I'd paid 2.99 for this I'd have felt cheated.

Dingy string of the garage door? Outside opening it? huh?

His own heart so rapidly that it felt as if it were in his throat. Think he missed a beat.

My problem was figuring out what hat to wear when reading.

Odd word choice "Hint of youth and casualty" Think he meant casualness.

Odd choice of Monroe Mi as home for new student. Being a Michigander born and bred the bike in the snow scene felt weird and the town didn't feel at all realistic.

Awkward word choices "veer further across his desk"

The school is described as being in an old hotel, yet the new wing is a dormitory? Seems like the last thing they'd need is bedrooms

I didn't buy into a school that is this underpopulated by teachers. Why would established students be in class with orientation students?

Others seemed to like this more than I.

Continuity and credibility issues abound.