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DNF at 35%
The writing wasn't for me. Found it extremely hard to believe that a four year old not only knows the word ferocious but uses in a casual sentence.
This book needs a beta read for sure it has potential, but some sentences are cringe and not believable. Also, don't see any non virgin 20 something year old calling it their "secret place." During sex that was an instant DNF. With a reedit,I'd reconsider
— Sep 09, 2023 04:25AM
The writing wasn't for me. Found it extremely hard to believe that a four year old not only knows the word ferocious but uses in a casual sentence.
This book needs a beta read for sure it has potential, but some sentences are cringe and not believable. Also, don't see any non virgin 20 something year old calling it their "secret place." During sex that was an instant DNF. With a reedit,I'd reconsider
