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elizabeth
is 44% done
Started off okay, now it’s kind of starting to insert things that make it feel like the author is trying to appeal to politically correct audiences for no reason.
A character is suddenly ‘They/Them’ and look, I have no issue with that but it felt randomly placed in the story to add a modern flare or something lol
Like why are we correcting pronouns when this character just committed a murder? 😭
— Sep 12, 2023 11:01PM
A character is suddenly ‘They/Them’ and look, I have no issue with that but it felt randomly placed in the story to add a modern flare or something lol
Like why are we correcting pronouns when this character just committed a murder? 😭
elizabeth
is 40% done
Okay I just feel like it’s so random and unnecessary, when describing the decor in Dasha’s room for her to have ‘Amazonian women riding dinosaurs’ on posters. Like?
What kind of weird fantasy writing is this lol
— Sep 12, 2023 10:43PM
What kind of weird fantasy writing is this lol

