Carol Horne’s Reviews > Detective Michael Angel: Books 8-14 > Status Update
Carol Horne
is 2% done
I shall be changing my rating as I’m appalled at the lack of care in the grammar. These have become mere pit boilers. Shame, as the plots themselves have some merit. And the insistence on describing eye movements- have you tried doing them.? What do they mean? Is this some fancy take on what eye movement should indicate to police psychologists? Well, it escapes me.
— Sep 23, 2023 01:29AM
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Carol Horne
is 2% done
irritatingly incorrect use of subaqua terms.Insufficient research, sloppy.
Cylinders, not bottles
Compressed air, not oxgen
Fins, not flippers
— Jun 28, 2023 12:45PM
Cylinders, not bottles
Compressed air, not oxgen
Fins, not flippers

