LakerL24vr’s Reviews > The Confidence of Wildflowers > Status Update
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I’m enjoying the story. Struggled realllllly hard around 20% because I was looking for MORE - more descriptive writing. More adverbs-adjectives and MORE feels. Feels very robotic. Going through her movements and interactions - feel like this storyline with Thayer’s son - could absolutely be cuter, just more. Idk, I like it now, but only because I’ve gotten used to the writing. Makes me sad tbh.
— Oct 02, 2023 07:21AM
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LakerL24vr
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Pleaseee give me more descriptive writing. I want to feel inside the story. Smells, outfits, more with the character’s facial expressions and body language. MORE-MORE-MORE. This could be so epic!
— Oct 02, 2023 07:23AM
