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Was this book better than the first two? Definitely. The characters had more depth, their reactions to each other felt more reasonable and overall, it just made more sense.
However, it is incredibly descriptive for such a short novella and the use of the foreign word kurv@ as a female’s name who betrayed the MMC is extremely inappropriate. Authors shouldn’t use foreign words without a complete background check.
— Oct 02, 2023 04:59PM
However, it is incredibly descriptive for such a short novella and the use of the foreign word kurv@ as a female’s name who betrayed the MMC is extremely inappropriate. Authors shouldn’t use foreign words without a complete background check.
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InkedBookSloth
is on page 25 of 148
This is the perfect example of telling not showing! It’s not enough that we get loads of unnecessary information, but why is there 14 pages of inner monologues/ descriptions?
14 pages!
For how short these books are, they suffer from some serious pacing issues. I can’t dnf anything, that includes any series I start so another 4 books will be torture if they don’t improve. And I don’t think they’ll improve.
— Oct 02, 2023 11:20AM
14 pages!
For how short these books are, they suffer from some serious pacing issues. I can’t dnf anything, that includes any series I start so another 4 books will be torture if they don’t improve. And I don’t think they’ll improve.
InkedBookSloth
is on page 15 of 148
You must be kidding me! Can authors do a little background search before they use foreign words?!
Kurva? Really? Couldn’t the author find a better name? Hungarians (myself), Polish, Czech, Slovakian, Slovenian, Finnish, Russian, Latvian, Lithuanian, Serbian and Croatian people use it as a swear word. It means f*ck and also sl*t / wh*re.
Was this a necessary name for a female? Feels misogynistic if you ask me O.o
— Sep 29, 2023 05:47PM
Kurva? Really? Couldn’t the author find a better name? Hungarians (myself), Polish, Czech, Slovakian, Slovenian, Finnish, Russian, Latvian, Lithuanian, Serbian and Croatian people use it as a swear word. It means f*ck and also sl*t / wh*re.
Was this a necessary name for a female? Feels misogynistic if you ask me O.o
InkedBookSloth
is on page 14 of 148
I thought the writing style used in book 1 and 2 would change as less background would be needed. Even if they are connected stand-alones, the books focus on different couples hence don’t need as much build up when the characters are separated.
However, I think my issue is with the author’s writing style at this point. This is a novella, I don’t need to know about irrelevant characters’ background.
— Sep 29, 2023 05:25PM
However, I think my issue is with the author’s writing style at this point. This is a novella, I don’t need to know about irrelevant characters’ background.
