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InkedBookSloth
is on page 78 of 150
Drakkar is an absolute marshmallow in the body of an alien warrior. His inner monologues are all about feeling shame for losing control - which he did not, simply his kind is obsessed with restricting anything that could be enjoyable. Meanwhile he made a bed for the baby, warmed up the baby, fixed Kitty's clothes, warmed Kitty when she was cold, reassured her of her safety and prioritised her comfort. Adorable!
— Oct 07, 2023 03:42PM
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InkedBookSloth
is on page 142 of 150
Now this book I liked. The first two books were weak in my opinion whilst the third one was somewhat better. However, this one is a significantly improved story. Not only the pacing is more balanced between showing and telling, and descriptions/inner-monologues and dialogues, but there's more depth to the characters without the book feeling like it's filled with info dump and the romance felt more natural as well.
— Oct 07, 2023 04:50PM
InkedBookSloth
is on page 26 of 150
Whilst it's still heavy in descriptions and inner-monologues, this book uses more showing than telling, so that's definitely an improvement compared to book 1-3. At least until now. We will see how it goes as the story progresses, but I'm more hopeful than I was with the other books.
— Oct 07, 2023 02:33PM
