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Haha I know right!

I wanted to thank you for the good review and the comments. You really got my characters. I loved when you said how Caitlin's passion and strong mind are an admiration when used for good. That was excatly the point I wanted to show!!

This really was an amazing book! My hat is off to you, how you were able to develop those characters so nicely, and yes Caitlin was so strong and passionate, it was incredible!! I loved it!! Thank you so much!

You read a lot of books so I want to ask you a question about tags. Do you like a book to have a lot of he said, she said? The guy helping me edit is a retired english teacher and he keeps adding in tags. He thinks it sounds smoother. I've always been told to use tags spareingly. What is your opinion?

I would agree with you; sparingly is probably what I would prefer. If I see a lot of those it would probably throw the story off a little for me. I want it to flow more easily than that if that makes sense...

That is what I thought. I just don't want to ignore his advice sine he was an english teacher, but I'm not sure what kind of writier he is. I'm trying to polish up my novel and fix the grammar mistakes, but I don't want to add in words I don't need. Thanks!!