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FayAnn
FayAnn is 9% done
I'm in chapter 3 & I'm already thinking on giving it up. The story keeps going back & forth between memories & the present. W/o anything acknowledging the memories except italics. One paragraph is typed normal & the next is italics. To this slow reader this style doesn't work. I will try a little more before I totally give up.
Jul 22, 2015 12:35AM
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