Evan’s Reviews > The Man Who Haunted Himself > Status Update
Evan
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So far it feels appropriate to be reading this before Halloween but the narration is a little dry and the story is not the most engaging. Fortunately it's short so I'm going to stick with it.
— Oct 17, 2023 07:06AM
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Evan
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The author seems to be increasingly focused on making a political statement to the point where it is taking away from the story. A more competent writer would be able to weave the two together but right now it seems like every few minutes of story is book-ended by about 5 minutes of political commentary and racism pushed beyond the bounds of caricature.
— Oct 18, 2023 07:01AM
