Jeanette’s Reviews > Key: The End of the Age of the Dragon's Conquest > Status Update

The struggle is real.

It feels like the story has actually started and everything before was prologue. What. Initiate skim read.

Has the writing gotten...better? Or is the short break working in my favour?

End of part one. I might take a break here and read something else.

He poured cold water into a glass with childish pride before Daniel had a chance to respond.

"Thank you, Skyeola." He felt the coolness of the fresh drink upon the glass as he accepted it with delicate fingers and took a long sip, enjoying the freezing sensation of the liquid.

I think this is a winner for Most Epic Sculling of Water.

I'm getting this uncontrollable urge to take a red pen to the story. There's good writing hiding under a lot of clutter and mess.

The plot! It's moving!