Chris’s Reviews > Fairy Tale > Status Update
Chris
is 60% done
I'm struggling! First 30% was terrific. I'm now at a point where there are long ambling looping descriptions that repeat and don't really propel the story forward...which I've started to take as a sign that the story doesn't know where its going - I call this "Under The Dome syndrome." I shall brace for deus ex machina. The only thing keeping me engaged is I'm slightly curious where Charlie ends up at the end of it.
— Oct 19, 2023 04:39PM
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