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Elizabeth
Elizabeth is 12% done
The heroine reminisces how many times she met hero (master of disguise) for a slap and tickle. She talks of years ago and long befores and eons. How old are these people 103? They are supposed to be early and mid thirties respectively! When did they start having sex together when they were 10?
Jul 26, 2015 03:51PM
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Elizabeth
Elizabeth is 60% done
And we go back in time again, as if anything could make this book interesting. For all the guns, and plots and gadgets and flashbacks this is dull, dull and dull. And the plot is so ridiculous! For example, h. comes from an old family of arms dealers/manufacturers who are now international vigilantes!!! Trained killer at 16, gave up at 26, the world and his uncle after her but she does not want a 'babysitter'. Bleh
Aug 03, 2015 04:11PM
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Elizabeth
Elizabeth is 20% done
Seriously, if the h is to be that stupid then make her an amateur, a clueless civilian, but a trained assassin? A trained assassin would not go to her 'normal work' in high heels, seductress hair, etc.. She would not need to be told those things. The writing is passable to good but the plot is stupid, and the h. is fast matching the plot.
Jul 28, 2015 04:28AM
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Elizabeth
Elizabeth is 16% done
So it is the Russians supplying guns to Afghani warlords! Strange, facts say otherwise.
Jul 26, 2015 05:07PM
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