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Alex
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The scenes don't seem to advance, it's like going around in circles. Characters not properly introduced.
— Aug 12, 2015 10:14PM
Alex
is on page 75 of 146
Some of the stuff that bugs me is, that the author has no idea on how a nursing home is run and how the court system works.
— Aug 09, 2015 05:51PM
Alex
is on page 45 of 146
There's a few grammar issues, and a few present and past tense issues, looks like the author over looked some things.
— Aug 07, 2015 08:45PM
