Anna Goerlitz’s Reviews > Stripped Expectations > Status Update
Anna Goerlitz
is 45% done
Completely random out of the blue sex scene - with random unrelated to the story stranger - which gave nothing to the story or told me anything about the mc. Why?
— Jul 30, 2015 02:40PM
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Anna Goerlitz
is 40% done
A lot of telling and not a lot showing. Dissappointed so far.
— Jul 28, 2015 03:00PM
