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Martha Rivera (Avid Reads)
is 39% done
Some of the lines that are funny, it seems like the author is trying to hard, epecially with Amelias charscter. I kerp being told she's crazy but I can see tgst, I don't mean to be told.
— Jul 30, 2015 03:23PM
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Martha Rivera (Avid Reads)
is 87% done
ok, so the chemistry during the scenes falls glat. The scenes are rushed and its straight to another scene.
— Aug 05, 2015 07:01PM
Martha Rivera (Avid Reads)
is 37% done
Just when I think there's a good connection btw Owen and Brennan, it feels forced and cheesey.
— Jul 30, 2015 03:13PM
Martha Rivera (Avid Reads)
is 29% done
Thre seems to be a lot of building ad building the lpot but the unexpectedly it goes flat. Its like a bad Rollercoaster except its still interesting but you dont know where its taking you
— Jul 29, 2015 11:28AM
Martha Rivera (Avid Reads)
is 14% done
It's really interesting but the thought jump a little too much.
— Jul 27, 2015 04:21PM
