RandomLibrarian’s Reviews > Defiance of the Fall 11 > Status Update

Enjoyed the first 60% a lot, but there are pacing, world building and power scaling issues in the later parts of the book that are jarring to the feel of the main storyline. Could be overcome with better use of time skips and moving overall power scaling forward… but there is so much world building baggage that its honestly just more enjoyable when he leaves earth.. basically two separate storylines now.