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Gaia
is 22% done
I think that would kill the author if she gave a description or characterisation at the secondary characters.
Like Imogen has pink hair, hated Violet and is good at fighting that practically all. Idem all Violet or Xaden friends🙃.
A good plot and world building isn’t enough sadly.
— Nov 11, 2023 12:06PM
Like Imogen has pink hair, hated Violet and is good at fighting that practically all. Idem all Violet or Xaden friends🙃.
A good plot and world building isn’t enough sadly.
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Gaia
is 70% done
It’s long. Maybe too long, but the pace is good.
Secondary characters still have zero personality, I can understand if you want kill them off, but still I can’t bear so many 2 dimensional characters, and they are too many, it’s like stranger things that keep add new people.
— Nov 12, 2023 05:29AM
Secondary characters still have zero personality, I can understand if you want kill them off, but still I can’t bear so many 2 dimensional characters, and they are too many, it’s like stranger things that keep add new people.
