Brynette Turner’s Reviews > Wolf > Status Update
Brynette Turner
is 48% done
The author definitely needs to take a writing class! Not knowing how to construct paragraphs and conversations, using the wrong words, and having poor punctuation are annoying and distracting. Not giving enough information from the series that's the basis for this spinoff is confusing. So is failing to fully develop characters and their relationships. Being a good storyteller isn't the same as being a good writer.
— Nov 13, 2023 05:18AM
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