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"Making sure his unruly blond hair was quaffed just so." I believe she means "coiffed." The editor didn't catch that?
— Aug 07, 2015 06:05AM
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Kerry A
is 8% done
The pacing is weird. I think that when she agreed to work at the hotel there should have been a break or a new chapter.
— Aug 07, 2015 06:03AM
