Melissa’s Reviews > Chained > Status Update

Seem there is more slow pieces in this story. The new Twins story with the Nun sounds interesting and the facet that she is part Irish and African American. There seems to be more culture added to her stories which I am enjoying. But for crying out loud, speed things up a bit. Lol. I love this authors imagination though, so I won't let the prior book or this one deter me. I'll keep going.

Since Shadowed things feel forced. This one in particular. Why agree to go to a strange planet (Spa) to pose as someone you are running from. And they just met, why have this expectation of having sex their first time like this? I like Baird and Sylvans, and the twins stories better. Things just meshed and the plot of better thought out. This...this is just space and time wasted it seems.