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Kaitlin
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Not sure about this one. Not a fan of the writing style and the punctuation is terrible, run-on sentences and such.
— Aug 08, 2015 01:18PM
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Kaitlin
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This is all moving rather quickly. They just met... There needs to be more build, more connection. They basically went from Hi my name is Parker, my name is Lily, to sleeping together, to now "He's mine." Eye roll... Oh! And the grammar and punctuation is still awful!
— Aug 08, 2015 04:10PM
