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Barbara
is 53% done
The portrayal of General Sorrengail does not give me the impression that she would have allowed Violet to snap at her.
Editing Frustration: I think they flipped 5 pages and then picked a word googled the word and thesaurus, picked one that sounded interesting.
— Nov 17, 2023 04:31AM
Editing Frustration: I think they flipped 5 pages and then picked a word googled the word and thesaurus, picked one that sounded interesting.
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Barbara
is 87% done
If this becomes a movie and they don’t select an actress who is pale skinned and weak like a baby deer…. They have selected the wrong character for Violets portrayal based on the descriptors Yarros has given
— Nov 20, 2023 08:20AM
Barbara
is 67% done
Please for the love of all that is good in this world. Take 18 months to realize the third book, fire your current editing team and get a new one. I volunteer to do it for free. There is so much potential here!!!
— Nov 17, 2023 06:31PM
Barbara
is starting
There is a great deal of potential but the editing was truly missing. I’m torn between the idea that Yarros was actually pitching a new TV series and there are just loads of ideas thrown up in a sequential order OR the entire editing team and Yarros subscribe to the theory of done is better than perfect. So much potential here but really think it needs a better editing team to smooth things out.
— Nov 16, 2023 08:18PM
