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Flora
Flora is 18% done
The framing device of letters addressed to a 14-year-old is really straining my suspension of disbelief, but the first couple of chapters really got me interested so I'm gonna stick with it at least a bit longer.
Nov 21, 2023 01:31PM
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Flora
Flora is 66% done
The voice the audio book reader is doing for this antagonistic character is so bad and also weirdly like Harlan Ellison's AM voice in the video game
Nov 24, 2023 01:53PM
Ascension


Flora
Flora is 54% done
I'm trying to define why I'm interested in the flashbacks, but feel like the climb up the mountain really falls flat. I think that it's because the main character has no idea what's going on (to the same degree or even moreso than the reader), and the situation around him is so unconvincing that any relevation seems as likely or unlikely as anything else. It's not grounded in anything.
Nov 24, 2023 08:33AM
Ascension


Flora
Flora is 43% done
If I need to read one more conversation like,
"[Talking about basic evolutionary concepts like they're revolutionary]"
"[Brings up religion for no reason]"
"[Atheist irrationally angry at the mention of God]"
"[Insistence that they need to work together to solve this poorly defined mystery]"
I'm gonna lose it
Nov 23, 2023 10:40AM
Ascension


Flora
Flora is 27% done
The flashbacks are really the strongest parts of the narrative so far. As they encounter dangers on the trek up the mountain I feel like I have no idea what is motivating the main character or most of the side characters to do this. Why is this bunch of scientists climbing this mountain? They don't seem to have any choice but also seem weirdly cool with this death-march.
Nov 22, 2023 11:20AM
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