Lani’s Reviews > Arthur and Teddy Are Coming Out > Status Update

Struggling with this so far. Love the cover art, love the premise but the writing is very basic and unpolished. I'm not convinced this has been edited because we have gems like this:

"Teddy rolled his eyes. He hadn't meant to make the noise with his mouth, but it was loud enough to get Ben's attention."
That's quite an eye roll, sir.

Also Teddy's mum is an irrational homophobic twat so far.