Liz ݁ ˖ִ ࣪✩₊ ⊹˚ - INACTIVE’s Reviews > Storm Raven > Status Update
Liz ݁ ˖ִ ࣪✩₊ ⊹˚ - INACTIVE
is 70% done
This writing is doing my fucking head in bro. And I keep losing interest because I don't bloody care about the politics of this world. I just wanna see pirates being pirates :c
— Nov 26, 2023 08:13AM
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Liz ݁ ˖ִ ࣪✩₊ ⊹˚ - INACTIVE
is 47% done
I think the writing is why I'm having such trouble getting through this. The story is fun enough but man, it's so literally written and I can't visualise things for the life of me
— Nov 19, 2023 07:22AM
Liz ݁ ˖ִ ࣪✩₊ ⊹˚ - INACTIVE
is 27% done
The way people speak in this sometimes feel so unrealistic lol, like: "it's not my job, but I'll do it this once for something to do" it feels like too much info that people just not naturally say? Idk.
Otherwise enjoying this ^^
— Nov 09, 2023 03:14AM
Otherwise enjoying this ^^
