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Shawnie Nicole
is 35% done
I... don't like the way this reads... it's kinda rushed and jerky. Claire is my least favorite person at this point she doesn't listen and it has to go her way. I'm not feeling it. Rafer should be this bad ass SEAL and yet I feel like the author wrote him like all he did was ride a desk never any field work. Ugh...
— Aug 13, 2015 07:03PM
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