Kaygen’s Reviews > 7 Steps to Seducing Your Fake Fiancé > Status Update
Kaygen
is 5% done
I'm not sold on Larkin's backstory here. #1, I doubt Jake would have left her in a sketchy 'hood regardless of what was going through her mind. But even more, there's no reason she couldn't have stayed with her step brother to confirm the story when the police arrived. She's just his friend. Why would the police look into her last name!? There's no merit in this. I wish Siskind could have come up with better.
— Nov 27, 2023 12:29PM
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Kaygen
is 80% done
Getting bored of this. I already know what will (or should) happen. The whole "nobody will like me if they know who my dad is" excuse is flimsy at best. And now that Jake is back, he and Larkin could appeal to the parole board.
— Dec 08, 2023 03:47PM
Kaygen
is 55% done
I'm having a hard time buying this one. It's getting better, but sometimes the writing gets a bit obvious and the dialogue stilted.
— Dec 04, 2023 04:26PM
