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ForTheLoveofBrishen
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What an epic mess of a book. Joan and Maikku are back together. Did an editor have a sip of wine and bingewatch netflix instead of editing with a fine tooth comb or nah🤷🏻♀️
Still ...they're a lot of hot aliens doing sinful things🔥
— Nov 30, 2023 02:48PM
Still ...they're a lot of hot aliens doing sinful things🔥
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ForTheLoveofBrishen
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Oh for FFS, she screwed up the pairings AGAIN Well I never ....
I was enjoying the story, but if you can't be bothered to make at least an editorial pass over your completed work and clean it up as an Indie Author, I have no obligation to hold on to my enthusiasm for your story.
— Nov 30, 2023 02:53PM
I was enjoying the story, but if you can't be bothered to make at least an editorial pass over your completed work and clean it up as an Indie Author, I have no obligation to hold on to my enthusiasm for your story.
ForTheLoveofBrishen
is on page 72 of 99
🤣 by chapter 19, Angela Castle has forgotten the pairings for each couple and Mixes it up. Here let me help.
●Anna and Morrdrook
●Abby The redhead and Nular
●Joan and Mukkia or whater.
Tell me why for the last chapters has she put Joan with Nular and Mukkia just vanished. Wonder if she course corrects in the next few pages?
— Nov 30, 2023 02:34PM
●Anna and Morrdrook
●Abby The redhead and Nular
●Joan and Mukkia or whater.
Tell me why for the last chapters has she put Joan with Nular and Mukkia just vanished. Wonder if she course corrects in the next few pages?
