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Farshad Torkashvand
is 70% done
Interesting concept for training montages, but I get frustrated with these stupid themes that have been happening throughout the series. Why should someone else be paying for the mistake of others when they are not even acknowledging the mistakes that they are making.
What kind of lesson is there? It is like doing homework for others. However, in this series, instead of having set back, those people get rewarded.
— Dec 06, 2023 08:45PM
What kind of lesson is there? It is like doing homework for others. However, in this series, instead of having set back, those people get rewarded.
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Farshad Torkashvand
is 40% done
There is a scene in the book that shows 4 different pov, and it ends with nothing-it was there to explain a name.
— Dec 06, 2023 07:55AM
Farshad Torkashvand
is 28% done
“I don’t need any advice,” says the MC, who is a 13-year-old boy and reading a book seems like kryptonite. For the life of me, I cannot understand this recurring theme from fictional writers who hate their characters to read anything.
This book is a litrpg, whereas it should be full of spell books and so on and encourage MC for reading, instead, it cripples itself just to have meandering dialogue.
— Dec 06, 2023 06:08AM
This book is a litrpg, whereas it should be full of spell books and so on and encourage MC for reading, instead, it cripples itself just to have meandering dialogue.
Farshad Torkashvand
is 23% done
Interesting concept for training, but damn, the dialogue is awful, the MC becomes too stupid, and only the MC gets punished for stupidity of others is too unreasonable and unrealistic.
— Dec 06, 2023 03:11AM
Farshad Torkashvand
is 13% done
The author brambles a lot, and every side story becomes a thorn in the eyes of readers.
— Dec 06, 2023 01:28AM
